Each wave, draws me closer.Like driftwood, in search of its shore.Entwined destinies.Each wave, guides me, into your arms.You are my shore.With you I belong.
Write comment. Good poetry, Pia. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
where have you been....iip
This is quite lovely. Each wave/ Guides me/ Into your arms/ You are my shore/ With you I belong.
simple easy and beautiful
the charm imbued by simplicity is hard to replicate
very nice write
A fair destiny Pia and it's touched by every heart.
I have a poem, 'Driftwoods', to my credit. Same philosophy, sans that other Person's presence drawing you close.........Good poem. Short and sweet.
Entwined destinies.......stories hidden in an enunciation......subtle and inetersting i must say...
Truly beautiful in form, in structure and in sound. Simply lovely, and inspiring. - Will
a sweet poem. Agree with prior comment, it seems you have strong faith, awesome.
A beautiful verse that reveals one's blind faith and passion for the Almighty. 'A Driftwood I'm' is my poem that claims its importance in this world. Wish, you may read it.
excellent poem. Has visual qualities. Like the analogy of Driftwood. It is a 10. Milda
Battled oceans filled with tears
But now my ports in view
Now that iv'e discovered you
Moody Blues Chris xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem »