The clay beneath her muddy feet, welled up between her toes,
A squeal of unencumbered bliss, from her young soul arose,
Dancing in the rain alone, arms spread-eagled wide,
An aged mother looking on, shook her head and sighed.
“Remember well these carefree times…before the clock of ages chimes”.
...these few lines chime out the poetic perception of the reality hovering over the minds of the aged.Perhaps your short piece may cast a long spell on the minds of the readers.Thanks a lot Mr Alf Hutchison for sharing.. Keep writing.
aging, disease and death are the sad realities of life........a good write...
dear alf.....some childhood memories remain in the heart...and when we look back we experience a sense of joy, watching children do the same.lovely poem, full of feelings.best wishes. ritty
beautiful...... nicely penned......thanks for sharing...
Something very beautiful caught within the moment yet somehow so totally free Amazing writing Love duncan mark wyllie
This has a great singy sound to it, and a wonderful poetic phrase for a close. nicely penned! =)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
“Remember well these carefree times…before the clock of ages chimes......as the time heaves the mystery life acyclic, wonderful expressin yet ingeniously curved across the time and space,10+++, thanks for sharing