Path of my voyage
Closed in front of eyes
By waving a farewell
To all my provisions
I had wished for life
In cover of its obscurity
I cried on limited power
Inside my silent shelter
Which time laid for me
To discover my new lay
Then I had found
There lays no end
For a true heart
That beats in love
Even when it breaks
So my old words died
On tip of my tongue
And new melodies came
From deep inside heart
I sang my new lays
When my old tracks
Had gone with wind
New land had opened
For me to wonder
In its hidden rich beauty
When one path is close other path is opened......a good write.......
very good decesion.knock the door, it will open. nice poem.keep it up port. voted10 surya
You have described Life well in a few sentences. Things change; You never how things can change, change for the better only if look for it. Well published.
a very good attitude in this poem...go forth for the beauty
hello friend! ! ! ' When my old tracks Had gone with wind New land had opened For me to wonder In its hidden rich beauty ' so glad to hear you talking like this friend! ! ! ! ! .....nice poem indeed! ! ! ! ... i wish i can think like this..i m all negative and pessimistic! ! 10++ well deserved.. with love shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Closed paths are apparent though in static situations of life with one finding him or herself directionless. Yet the trance is what that can make the otherwise aimless life of a human being to glow if one follows the circle of pragmatism. Best Wishes Naseer