On a cold winter's morning,
Watching, Luna, Spica, and Jupiter,
Dance through the Heavens.
Recalling, thoughts of you.
Saying hello to distant memories,
Since then,
It has been dreams of centuries past.
I miss you very much.
I want to see you,
I want to take your hand,
I want to hold your Soul in my arms once again,
I want to feel your passion next to me while we dream.
Closing my eyes, wishing upon dancing stars.
To stand beside you once again.
No matter how much I wish and dream,
Of you and me together.
I know love can not be.
I closed the door on love,
A long time ago,
While whispering, I love you.
Ronald, there is something about the quality of your writing that makes the reader feel your great loss. We mourn with you at the tragic loss of your love. Yet, we somehow remain optimistic about love being eternal. You have done an excellent job in conveying your true feelings. This heart-felt poem is truly worthy of Poem Of The Day! Congratulations, Ronald!
A beautifully conceived song of life. Congrats on it's poem of the Day.
Romantic flow of this poem fills mind with cheerfulness. There is promise to hold hand, to feel and hold soul. Feeling qualities of soul and holding soul's degree in emotion is wise. Closing the door of love now love whisperers more in this interesting poem. Congratulations! This is a nice poem of the day...10
Kumarmani Mahakul... Thank you for reading my poem and your wonderful words.
A Beautiful romantic write on love lost long back yet the memories open it with love. Loved reading it. Congrats on the member poem of the day!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful love poem conveying deep passionate feelings, well conceived and nicely crafted from the heart. A smooth flow for joy. Thanks for sharing, sir.
Chinedu Dike, Thank you for the kind words. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem.