Closing Poem by Dislocated Heart

Closing

Rating: 5.0


no more shining stars,
for tonight is my last night.
closing off, closing my eyes.
closing from all thats around me.

hearts misplaced,
lost in the driver seat,
driving to a far away place.
never to see or to breathe...

got too near,
burning feeling,
stabbed right through...

no more shining stars,
for tonight is my last night.
closing off, closing my eyes,
closing from all thats around me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chaotic Life - Curly M. 15 March 2008

great poem but dont ever give up

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 04 March 2008

may the force be with you, pal.

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