Clouds Poem by Fahim Sayed

Clouds



Flying in the air
Through childhood fantasies,
Making friends with clouds
I recall those memories.

These snowy magical things,
Floating above us all
Who made them?
And how do they crawl.

I see them bringing the thunder,
I see them bring the rain,
They make an amazing sight,
Unbelievable frame

Now; I see them face to face
Tempted to hug them; an embrace,
I wish I could float with them,
Perhaps challenge them for a race.

Get them to play,
Songs of peace we’ll sing,
Hopping from one to another,
And on the smallest I’ll swing.

Pity, this experience is not possible;
without commercial aid.
I wish my body could fly;
as my imagination does.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 02 May 2009

beautiful poem dear Fahim I felt like Bryan Adams on Cloud No.9 keep sharing anjali

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Cyclopseven R 30 April 2009

Cloud is a marvel in the universe. Wonderful Fahim.

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Jeannie Ann Clark 24 April 2009

The clouds were intriging to me as a child and still continue to be...they are beautiful creations of God's Almighty hand. Thank you, Jeannie.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 23 April 2009

captivating piece thanks for sharing

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Isam Hussain 23 April 2009

When I was young I used to look at the night sky and dream of hopping from star to star. I have not given up hope yet; for one day, by His Grace, my wish will come true. Your poem is innocent and lovely.

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a beautiful racing poem has some of the thunder and a beautiful rain

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

combining impression style and magic realism! very beautiful and simple!

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premji premji 05 May 2009

body is a silly thing......your mind...your soul......can fly faster than clouds......

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The same old story - we always want what we can't have. And yet, there's always hoping, right? I adored it, and could visualise every word! ! ! Great write!

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Christopher Lee 02 May 2009

fantasy is the fort of poet great attemp Fahim

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