Clouds And Me Poem by Susan T. Aparejo

Clouds And Me

Rating: 4.4


I watched the clouds
and it watch me too,
I talked to him but gently flow
he waves farewell in my head above,
and joined the others to form new shape.

I appealed to to remain his shape,
he just nodded but couldn't resist,
he made me stare at him
enjoy the apparition in a while,
yet in a minute or two,
he simply passes me by.

Still I shouted where did he go?
he never answer but went to flow
how I wish I could follow
he can move to and fro,
the freedom he loves to
is the freedom I don't have to.
he could travel anywhere
without fare and toes
to him there's no place to hide
for me I have no place to ride.

Hail to you, white feathery clouds,
just visit me and dropped me some rain,
bring my greetings to the world in heaven,
that someday I would be like you,
flying in my journey to heaven...soon..

Sunday, June 21, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: farewell,freedom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 10 July 2009

Susan...this poem is excellent.simple words and deep meanings...keep it up...read my poem called an ode for the rain...

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Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

The imagery well illuminated and the imaginative bondage between you and the cotton wool like beautiful clouds is a picturesque. The beauty is well deified in this poem that shows your love for scenics.....10/10

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Rommel Mark Marchan 26 June 2009

cloud talking is mostly done by mortal being aspiring to be like a feathery clouds travelling to infinity man by nature is always seeking answers for his unanswerable journey of tranquility

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 June 2009

The scenical touch in this spontaneous chit-chat with clouds is splendid. A wishful comparison between a cloud and the first person singular of this poem has been described nicely through this charming write. Best Wishes Naseer

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Susan T. Aparejo

Susan T. Aparejo

Gingoog City, Philippines
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