Dutendra Chamling
Khotang, Nepal
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Cognizance/Awareness

Rating: 5.0
Creeping for eternity
On a banana leaf
I was but
A glum caterpillar.

One fine day
Your mere touch
Turned me into a butterfly
Discovering the colorful world.
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Saturday, November 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly,consciousness,democracy,equality,freedom,identity,politics,revolution
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COMMENTS
Pamela Sinicrope 05 March 2017
Nice micro poem. A metamorphosis exacted on the heart. Thanks for sharing.
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Chinedu Dike 10 February 2017
Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely poem nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
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Norah Tunney 17 March 2016
I love this poem! What a beautiful image
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2016
The colours of the world! With the muse of nature. Nice work.
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Chuy Amante 12 December 2015
touch us all god and help us to see that touch and then be free to experience! thanks for the translation
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Kim Barney 11 December 2015
What a wonderful thing to think that a touch from a person could turn a caterpillar into a butterfly! Probably no one else ever would have thought of that. Well done!
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Dutendra Chamling 14 December 2015
Kim Barney! Thank you so much.
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Manonton Dalan 03 December 2015
I love nature poem..this could be a person too, , , great
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Dutendra Chamling 05 December 2015
Manomonton Dalan! Thank you so much.
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Valsa George 29 November 2015
The growth from a caterpillar to a butterfly through a loving touch is beautifully summed up in limited words! Enjoyed reading your poem Dutendra!
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Dutendra Chamling 30 November 2015
Valsa George! Thank you so much for an enormous compliment.
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Anil Kumar Panda 29 November 2015
Beautifully written. Thanks for posting.
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Dutendra Chamling 29 November 2015
Anil Kumar Panda! Thanks!
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