poet sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

##### Colloquy Or Quarrel. Left Vs Right

No notice, events occur….ESP in sleep….two life has come… outlander....not human shape….but lively silhouette…..two hands…..left and right…they talk to knock each other….

Right: hi, You say something excellent idiotic!

Left: Humm, great wise-fool you are!

Right: Let oxymoron! Come on!
You just ‘movement’ me the ‘order’!

Left: though cortically different
Me play the role great!
See ‘95% of right-handed left-hemisphere
dominance for language’ in your head!

Right: Commotion your, to me tweet tweet
Induce much confusion bittersweet!

Left: Not true, you phallocentric, we seek
scientific method. Reasoning.

Right: In the name of science don’t lie!
Science not static, continuum, move forward with smile
Hypothesis-theory-philosophy can be tested and falsified!
Know history then talk! Don’t insult science!

Left: Mr. wise-fool, history worthless! People learn not
from history! Events circling why?

Right: yeap, events occur since you born by turn!
History – records – chronicles –acounts has a value!
War and peace both in dream.
Your actions against conscience!

Left: You oppressor-tormentor-killer
We save. Free. Seek absolute freedom. We healer!

Right: WoW! So sweet lie! Fallacious facts are
Weapon your! Absolute freedom huh! Then, say-
Man born naked, so must stay undress whole lifetime! Isn’t?
Let them do anything anywhere anytime!
Let vulgar-rude-crude-boorish be flooded!

Left: You all over stop creativity!
Let human brain grow more! Be sky! Don’t shy. Kiss your bride!
Anti-family we are….unbound we in the limitless space!

Right: oops! again erroneous tittle-tattle pomp pomp!
By born you’re not free. Your heart entrapped in microcosm!
You wish to fly but you can not!
All thing free mean destroy creativity!

Left: Let life just live…’just do it’..no second think.
Modernism now a deaf and dumb bagger!
We are in postmodern! Don’t move backward!
Free from taboo…enjoy….use all toe..huge wave.
Lips. Effloresced rose. Aesthetic pose. To move into….

Right: Strange! You’re lacking intellectual acuity!
So much foulness from you! See, deconstruction smile!
Postmodernism captured by binary opposition!
Dark and bright! No way to stop fight!

Left: No no no no…you’re looter shooter… you you…

Right: Cool cool! Don’t shout! Time as sunray moonlit…as air breeze..
Comes for all…doesn’t bother politics.
we are on the bright side….you ah! ...running towards
Pre-modern era… you scandalize civilization!

Left: No! you are on the side of nonsense capitalism!

Right: No! Don’t make cocktail! For some reason they come to us.
Same as, against capitalistic economy, we support you!

Left: We are humanistic….close to nature…evaluate truly the instinct.
No chance to be suppressed…open to all….end to end…love to love..
Call to call….flow to flow… baby to baby…

Right: Stop your limitless timeless flow….this is not the way to glow..
You humanistic huh! ...beat wisdom by the satanic stick! You worship
Satan! we worship God the almighty!

Left: Where’s God? Ever you seen? We can not drink delusion!

Right: You speak untrue! Show me the proof that ‘there is no God’?
We see indirect proofs ….attributes…his system-rules-laws all over.
You blind….your inner eyesight off or willingly stay inside No!

Left: You’re blind we see….In the name of God
You play kill game. Religion is the cause of hatred, atrocity!


Right: Misconstrued.. misconceived..misinterpretation!
Some hypocrite has given chance you to say so!
Incapable you can’t encompass whole.
Hatred, atrocity not just because of religion!
Finance, power the trigger.

Left: why your God can not save atrocities?

Right: Because things are relative, laws active. Direct action
By God if taken, then how can be judged human wisdom!
And at times God control over….you blind just do not see!

Left: Lefts are made………bereft……….left! No, not sure! May be!

Right: You auxiliary. we respect your conscience! Not identical all of left.
Powerful polemic Some are, we know.
Bye for now.

-september-2009,
copyright reserved.

Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 27, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, October 5, 2009

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  • Antonio Liao (10/11/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    'a mode that talks'....the willingness to stand amidst the chaotic
    world gives.... a fighter of his own realm.....my hope and respect cloth
    you with wisdom
    .....to see life reflectively and lead your dream to a crucially face the
    point of departure
    .....an honest fight ends with strong determination..... go my friend
    ...i will be your shadow of loosing the grief of the world....stand for you
    ...God bless a 10+++++

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  • Indira Babbellapati (10/9/2009 1:11:00 PM)

    mind boggling intellectualism...

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  • Lynda Robson (10/6/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem Sarwar, well thought out whichever side of the brain you used,
    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (10/5/2009 5:52:00 PM)

    Another significant write...a piece to ponder..
    a mind-working piece..GREAT
    many topics can be brought up with this...
    the left and right in the society..our ideology.
    our mentality....our perception towards things
    how our mind works...physically, psychologically, emotionally, spiritually, mentally and socially...in all aspects...
    the connection of being a right or left handed..i find this amusing
    for i am a left handed person...how it differs from the other
    the right and the left hemisphere of our brain....
    how it affects my attitude...my mind..my being me...
    I love this...a write with great things to share...
    Thanks for sharing, my friend
    10++++++++


    Lovelots,

    Maia

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  • Anand Madhukar (10/4/2009 9:08:00 AM)

    I fully agree with Mamtaji. You have adroitly brought together disparate schools of thought and diverse emotions in this uniquely innovative piece.

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  • Mamta Agarwal (10/4/2009 6:17:00 AM)

    congrats Sarwar, you have so skillfully interwoven science, theology, psychology, history, through this at times hilarious dialogue full of witticism(am still laughing at your choice of phrases and the colloquial style) wisdom, contradictions. you have presented all the frailities of human mind, eccentricities. its quite a colloquy, with lots of defensiveness, egoism and aggression.. left vs right - exceptionally creative.10+++++


    Mamta

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  • Kafil Uddin Raihan (10/3/2009 2:59:00 PM)

    exceptional and interesting.....better to say it marvelous........great job sir...

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  • Anjali Sinha (10/3/2009 8:09:00 AM)

    wow sarwar
    another special only from YOU
    I love this colloquy-left vs right
    something unique
    certainly you deserve not 10
    but many 100000000000000000's
    lots of love
    anjali

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  • Nooruddeen MmNooruddeen Mm (10/3/2009 1:56:00 AM)

    An excellent idea said in a different manner.

    Rgds
    Nooruddeen

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  • Seema Chowdhury (10/2/2009 6:23:00 AM)

    sarwar, thanks alot for sharing this nice and meaning ful poem with me.
    its always a pleasure to read your unique and interesting style of poetry.
    i wish there would me more people to understand things in the manner you do.
    take care

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (10/1/2009 11:55:00 PM)

    The right hemispher and the left in fight and argument, refernce to history and the big divide in the head, body, very technical write to get to the theme with strong words. Your unique style.10

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  • Noel Horlanda (10/1/2009 9:50:00 PM)

    Quite interesting this piece is, philosophical arguments that no one will benefit, no lossers, no winners everything will be fine. Though the arguments, the dialogues are believable and also intellectual. Excellent write!

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (10/1/2009 2:14:00 PM)

    another unique creativity and nice write philosophical contrast between left and right...good job Sarwar.....10

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  • Sanjib Das (10/1/2009 11:05:00 AM)

    LIKE DAY AND NIGHT, TRUE AND FALSE, YOU PRESENT A CONTRAST IN A VERY AMAZING MANNER. I GIVE YOU, IF POSSIBLE,100/10

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  • Rafique Farooqi (9/30/2009 4:35:00 AM)

    very interesting write.....well done starx100000

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  • Catrina Heart (9/29/2009 8:32:00 PM)

    wow you have an oceanic brain.....so innovative, great dialogues shared with fabulous theme and lessons to take from it...well done! ! ! 10+++++++++

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  • Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (9/29/2009 1:20:00 PM)

    Hats off Sarwar, marvellous idea. While left part of the brain is responsible for reasoning, the right pervades its lateral thinking and gives birth to creativity.Left and right brains have perpetual divergence as all through truly depicted in your poem, but finally ' All's well that ends well, ' conflicts of left and right end up with mutual convergence, which is also a reality.Scientists start with right brain and lead to the fruition of left brain.Musicians fiddle with the left brain in the beginning, promote their creations through the right.FANTASTIC.

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (9/29/2009 8:53:00 AM)

    As always my brother, your work swells with direction and insight...the knowledge that you express leaps from the page....With each new poem you create....Another shade of your poetic soul....shines through....amazing gift you have 10+++++

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (9/29/2009 3:01:00 AM)

    As usual this is wonderfully creative and your presentation from left vs right is detailed and interesting. It shows how 'sides' won't compromise. Great poem sarwar! 10 Karin

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  • Philosophy of a DewyFlower (9/28/2009 1:50:00 PM)

    Left and Right are Radically DIFFERENT/
    Left never ever Understand Right and Right never ever Understand Left.
    a good Philosophical poem transmit strong messages
    10 for the Creativity
    Thanks For Sharing/

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