Coma Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Coma

Rating: 5.0


As I lie in my comatosed mind
I hear voices with no eyes
All I see is darkness
with mixed images of my life

Oh lord
oh angels
feel my plight
stop this darkness
give me light
let me love with all my heart

As my eyes open
and my heart starts beating
I'm back with the living

I see the angels smiling
watching over me
now I know I'm home and free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 15 September 2013

Wow. Wonderful poem.. Really Coma stage is quiet a horrible one..God heard your prayers and you are safe.. Loved reading it.

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Walterrean Salley 05 May 2012

a beautiful and powerful prayer. I know God heard it. Glad you're safe.

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Unwritten Soul 30 April 2012

The dark was so intense and there were two lights to choose...i picked one and i still walking inside that one...i think this is way to go eternal paradise! bye2 others take care! _Unwritten Soul

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Eman Obied 27 April 2012

wow what a beautiful poem, that creates a true unignorable sensation of how one could be taken into the darkness and then back to the light

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Heather Wilson 25 April 2012

A beautiful poem, so heartfelt.the description was wonderful.

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