Come Let’s Go! ! Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

Come Let’s Go! !

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Come let’s go! !

The tomorrow beacons
Filled with hope
Life's pages with its multiple scope

The learning man
On his feet
Ever green; ever young and sweet

The squirrel and the sparrow
Off targets of cell phone vibrations
Simple creatures Lord's tiny creations

Does that mean
Man is not striding in progress
Each minus with its plus is full transgress

Vast the land of possibilities
Circular the circle of life's known
Tomorrow replaces today’s vacuum soon!

The now is then yesterday
The morrow is the present today
Walk with a whistle smiling on your way!

For does any thing; really matter?
If at all yes; till when?
Till Sundown or till you are done?

Mountains and mole hills alike
they are 'V' down turned
When; we are run down options are burned!

Till then the morrow beacons....
Come let’s go!
And not so slow! !
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Malinikadir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 10 June 2009

A bright prospect of continuity is shown in this poem which has to be adopted by every human being for the stasis in life can add to the seriousness of life and the spectrum of goals and aims starts to narrow that can stumble anyone.......10

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a progressive walk with technology alone in hand leads man into all dangers..a lovely write on the progress

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 June 2009

Yes, let's go ahead. Yesterday is gone. Let's start from the morning. Nice positive poem. Idea is wonderful- in favor of mankind.

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Saadat Tahir 27 June 2009

malini...u r a very talented poet...know your english and your imagery its almost flawless...for perfection lies in realms alone great poetry... i'll be back cheers and ten

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Duh Huh 17 June 2009

Yes, take life and live it without fear, Lets go and dont slow down except to see the beauty around. I love this. Thank you for sharing :)

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 June 2009

yeah move ahead........tomorrow beckons.....and yesterday repels................move ahead move ahead till goal is found...........a good write.......

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 June 2009

A vibrant writing Malini! ! !

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nice to read....... excellent.. unique

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