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seal a covenant
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~~~~~~©2018 Susan Williams
Oh, Thank you, Anjandev. I am glad you are finding my poems wonderful to read- -music to my ears! ! !
Sublime piece.......wonderful to read.....thank u......anjandev roy.
Thank you, Anjandev. I am glad you are finding my poems wonderful to read- -music to my ears! ! !
Mj! ! ! ! Thank you for pointing that out! I get so caught up with thinking and writing that I often fail to try reading it when it's done like a stranger! ! I was writing from the viewpoint you mentioned and never considered that there was another way to read it! Thank you for waking me up! ! ! I am so pleased you liked it cuz I have to admit I was a little tickled with how it turned out! ! !
Brilliant, Susan! There is a difference in meaning- -depending on whether or not I read the first line blending directly into the second. To my favourites...and a perfect 10!
Thanks for the poets notes, something else learned, gee this thing jumps around cheers kb
I think your comment about this thing jumps around might be referencing the way the site jumps around- I found that if you uncheck the autoplay box under the poem- the jumping around ceases
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
God always teaches about togetherness which allows us to tie life in integrity and unity. An amazing brilliant poem is well penned...10
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My friends, Thank you for sharing your thoughts on tthis piece and for the 10