Commodity Of Memories Poem by Bonnie Collins

Commodity Of Memories

Rating: 5.0


All of my tomorrows will never
compare to the shadows of
yesterdays happiness hidden
inside the walls of gold

Did you ever think the day we
left in the falls moonlight, that
we would remember that night
a lifetime

Moving forward was our destiny
Living in two worlds now separated
by one commodity of memories....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 20 November 2008

Memories are valuable commodity not for sale...!

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Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

well...memory is a rare invaluable commodity as we find out from this write...deeply felt well thought out excellently brought out piece, Bonnie...10

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Very beautiful Bonnie. Karin Anderson

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Stacey Watts 23 November 2008

Oh beautiful Bonnie, I love this piece. So the memories one can hold on to forever. Very well done.

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Andrew Blakemore 23 November 2008

The Queen of romance has produced another gem. Great work Bonnie. Love, Andrew x

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Ashley Burnam 22 November 2008

Hey Bonnie, This poem of yours...It makes me so sad because i just hear this loving saddness as you write. Keep writing girl and let your heart be heard.

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James Foulk 21 November 2008

Bonnie this is just beautiful and so warm and tender.

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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