Bonnie Collins
Middletown New York
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Choices

Rating: 5.0
I would rather live with your memory
than to have you with your fruitless
rose petels devour me

We shared a short lifetime of Happy Memories
Please lets keep it our Secret

No one will ever know, except
2 Hearts who learned a Little Too Late........
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Naidz Ladia 27 May 2009
bad memories should be left behind...continue to live for a bright tomorrow, , there, true love waits.., this lines contain honest words, , , a smart work..naizz
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I loved your poem. And we share the same birthday except for the year! Smile! Your poem was well written! Great Job
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Kesav Easwaran 01 November 2008
happiness learnt late...a poem talking frank and honest...good piece10
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Stacey Watts 16 September 2008
I can so feel this poem.. It is amazing the choices we have and the ones we make in haste, the ones we make out of loyalty in love. Very wonderful poem.
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Robert Sheridan 14 September 2008
Bonnie, A short, succinct piece... exceptional all the way! Robert
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C. P. Sharma 14 July 2008
The memories of first love never fade as Wordsworth says for Daffodills, 'they flash upon that inward eye which is the bliss of solitude.' And say as Keats says about the lovers on the Grecian Urn: Heard melodies are sweet, but those unheard Are sweeter; therefore, ye soft pipes, play on; Not to the sensual ear, but, more endear'd, Pipe to the spirit ditties of no tone: Fair youth, beneath the trees, thou canst not leave Thy song, nor ever can those trees be bare; Bold Lover, never, never canst thou kiss, Though winning near the goal—yet, do not grieve; She cannot fade, though thou hast not thy bliss, For ever wilt thou love, and she be fair! It is like wandering again and again in the memory lane to perpetuate the bliss.
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Abha Sharma 20 April 2008
Susceptible tender piece, the recollection of the petite past, urges to hold back banishing any regret but evicting any addition to unpleasant ones, the compressed style makes it thought provoking…poetic and emotional…..liked reading it.
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Tracker Ogryphon 24 February 2008
Very strong and to the point. Thanks Tracker
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Craig Anderson 07 February 2008
An exceptional write. Truly engaging. Regards. Craig.
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Joseph Enright 01 February 2008
This touched me right to my very marrow.I could almost feel your pain.Those of us who have been there can identify.
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