Comparisons Of You And Me Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Comparisons Of You And Me

Rating: 3.8


You are my seashore I am your waves
You are my dearest among all babes
If I am a bird you are my nest
If I am teeth you are my toothpaste
If you are a tree I am your fruit
If I am a leg you are my boot
If I am a dog you are my meat
If I am a brain you are my wit
If I am a cat you are my milk
If I am silkworm you are my silk
If I am body you are my dress
Without you my sex-life is worthless

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank (popeye) Pulver 29 November 2012

I liked you poem please email me and talk about your poem.

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Ruby Honeytip 29 November 2012

Hello Asif: -) This is sweet and easy to read. How refreshing! I saw your comments on the work of some of my fsvourite poets and thought I wouldpop by: -)

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Ramesh Rai 30 November 2012

A nice combination of you and me. good write.

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Ken Kerr 30 November 2012

Well done Asif, another good one...I've updated my profile, take a look, and added a new poem 'Where Is The Poem'. I appreciate your talent and hope that we can be friends Regards Ken

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 04 December 2012

A poem of pang that the nest of bird of its own creation

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Diwakar Pokhriyal 03 December 2012

nice one, its lovely comparison: -)

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 02 December 2012

Asif, this is one poem of yours which makes me smiling til the very end of your lines. This is indeed very entertaining, dear Asif. You take your lines so lightly and with fun and yet they containdeep thoughts and unexpected revelation towards the end. This is smartly done. Keep on writing and posting.

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Solmon Jejemore Gbemiga 30 November 2012

Wonderful written poem. Nice comparisons.

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Nader Baheri 30 November 2012

another piece of art.i believe poetry must be the way of showing our loves our passions and.. the way that you always use to show, state your love. nice job brother~nb

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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