Concrete Jungle Poem by Ernestine Northover

Concrete Jungle

Rating: 5.0


He swings his torch high and low,
piercing the dark undergrowth, green and lush,
casting a glow across the swampy places.

Leeches creep onto his laces,
and wheedle their way up his trouser legs,
these bloodsuckers are the dregs,
adhering to the skin on his shin.

They hang on tight. Gee, how they bite!

This tropical location he is in, has become
a fixation. Such beauty lit up at night, as parrots
take flight, screeching out as they flap their wings,
and a tree frog clings to a gnarled old root,
eyes staring resolute, tranfixed by the dazzling light,
and frozen by fright, until the fear eventually
sends him off, to scoff some nocturnal meal,
which will appeal to his taste buds.

Suddenly, the light flickers and goes out,
and he tries to shout, 'Where is the spare lamp? '.
He cannot tramp blind through this wild wood,
where there is a likelyhood of predatory reptiles that kill.
He feels a chill run down his spine.

And then a sound penetrates his ears. What is this he hears,
birds are loudly singing, and his wife is bringing him a cup of tea.
He feels all shivery!

It must have been an extreme dream.
For no rainforest meets his eyes, just a couple of buzzing flies,
and the cries of his children at play,
at the awakening of another day.

With a sigh he moans, 'Oh, why should I live in this
drab concrete jungle. What a reality, in all its totality.
But at least, I suppose there are no snakes, or are there? '.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 27 March 2008

A great descriptive piece Ernestine with a wonderful ending too. Andrew x

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 12 January 2007

Such vivid imagework, Ernestine...Felt like i was in that oared boat with Bogart & Hepburn, in the ' African Queen'! ....Solid Work, young Poetess. FJR

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Duncan Wyllie 12 January 2007

Great visual content, kept me interested...intriging as though awakened from a dream- like state only to find that you preferred the concept of the dream Thankyou Ernestine Love duncan X

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Egal Bohen 12 January 2007

Ernestine, You have captured the rain forest for the future - and don't we all love to dream - you make it appear more real than the visual memory - not so worried about the snake though! Egal..

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