Oneday in my dream
I came across a broken-wing bird
I silently asked 'Can you see me? '
With agony in eyes she screamed;
'I can see a pain-ful world'! !
Oneday in my dream
I came across a hungry lion
I fearfully asked 'Can you see me? '
With violence in his eyes he screamed;
'I can see the food which keeps me on'! !
Oneday in my dream
I came across an encaged rabbit
I politely asked 'Can you see me? '
With disgust it replied;
'I see slavery, deception and deceit'! !
Oneday in my dream
I came across a hunted deer
I frightfully asked 'Can you see me? '
Replied as it ran away;
'I see terror and fear'! !
Then oneday in my dream
I came across a smiling man
With despair I asked the same;
His smile banished; was it so lame! !
Without a reply the creature ran! ! !
Abandoned by everyone-
Dreams sank in deep water
To taste the voidness
Of this endless sea of despair! ! ! ! !
hi! remember me? hope so. i absolutly love this poem! i love the sort of story it give to the reader and the mood it put me in. message me back please! and also comment on my poems as well ok?
This is a beautifully written poem, reminding me of A walk in the Woods...I do do enjoy this style to get points across.....blessings
thats a sea of despair indeed to see the world so full of people yet every where there is lonliness and a void darkness engulfing...............poignant
A very odd way of explaining it but we feel your pain great poem
woah. did you really have these dreams. it is also good 10
You are an exceptional poet Deep: -) 'tis an honour to have read your lines
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
excellent write! ! Very unusual.