Arun Maji


Conquest Of The Sorrow - Poem by Arun Maji

If you're broken
you're broken!
Your soul is fragmented
and your love is crushed.

Don't even worry
who did it to you!
Worry
what is within you!

First- make a sea out of your tears
and float your fragmented soul.
And then- wait for the wind of love
reunite your fragmented soul!

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Conquest Of The Sorrow by Arun Maji

  • Bharati Nayak (6/23/2017 3:21:00 AM)


    First- make a sea out of your tears
    and float your fragmented soul.
    And then- wait for the wind of love
    reunite your fragmented soul! - - Very nicely done.We must realise that we are never alone.If there are people to hurt us, there are also people who love us.
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  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (5/7/2017 10:47:00 AM)


    Diversion towards the peace Should be learnt from sorrow,
    Nice poem sir.
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  • (4/26/2017 11:46:00 PM)


    Simply superb anecdote. Congrats on it's poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

    Arun Maji Arun Maji (5/1/2017 8:05:00 AM)

    thank you. you are kind.

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (4/26/2017 11:14:00 PM)


    Arun! your poem is both very sweet and cute.
    This is exactly what i shall do when i feel sad and lost.

    First- make a sea out of your tears
    and float your fragmented soul.
    And then- wait for the wind of love
    reunite your fragmented soul!

    Beautiful poem. Full Marks!
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    Arun Maji Arun Maji (5/1/2017 8:05:00 AM)

    you are generous. regards

  • (4/26/2017 7:04:00 PM)


    Float your fragmented soul. That line alone deserves Poem Of The Day. Congratulations, Arun! (Report) Reply

    Arun Maji Arun Maji (5/1/2017 8:06:00 AM)

    thank you for your generosity. regards

  • Pintu Mahakul (4/26/2017 6:18:00 PM)


    Waiting for wind of love revives trust of humanity and sorrow goes far. This is an interesting poem very well penned and shared. Congratulation! Your poem is nicely selected for the poem of the day...10 (Report) Reply

    Arun Maji Arun Maji (5/1/2017 8:06:00 AM)

    thank you for kind support.

  • Rajnish Manga (4/26/2017 1:20:00 PM)


    Life is full of ups and downs but we must keep our spirits high and show our resilience when down.
    If you're broken / you're broken!
    Don't even worry / who did it to you!
    And then- wait for the wind of love
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  • Tom Allport (4/26/2017 10:53:00 AM)


    a wise worded poem just waiting to set sail again? .............well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (4/26/2017 10:22:00 AM)


    Short and to the point. A very positive write.One should not lose heart even in worst days. Thanks for sharing and congrats. (Report) Reply

  • Glen Kappy (4/26/2017 7:40:00 AM)


    arun,

    i like the brevity of this poem and the way you've shaped it. but most of all i'm drawn to its channeling of wisdom- its frank recognition of pain, the need to grieve then wait, and the knowing love yet inhabits the world and breeze into our lives. -gk
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  • (4/26/2017 7:30:00 AM)


    That is the spirit to sail away with a full breeze, off to an unknown destination. What comes next? (Report) Reply

  • Siddartha Montik (4/26/2017 4:26:00 AM)


    Very nice.. and Peaceful encouraging Lines.! ~ and nicely Philosophical! ! thanks for sharing Poet! ! 10++! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/26/2017 2:32:00 AM)


    Congratulations for being selected for the poem of the day. Your soul is fragmented and love is crushed. That is why deep sorrow acquires mind. But there is no need to have worries for long time. Having love for life and God we get recovery from pain or sorrow. An amazing poem is shared here....10 (Report) Reply

  • Arun Maji (4/26/2017 1:35:00 AM)


    thank you everyone for your kind encouragement. you are kind. regards (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (4/26/2017 12:29:00 AM)


    Wind of love.... congrats on being chosen..... (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/26/2017 12:19:00 AM)


    First-make a sea out of your tears! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Sriranji Aratisankar (9/9/2016 11:46:00 PM)


    First- make a sea out of your tears
    and float your fragmented soul.
    And then- wait for the wind of love
    reunite your fragmented soul!

    nice Arun...good poet-craft.. I like your voice..10 for you..
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/5/2015 11:04:00 PM)


    And so is the life and it goes on..............10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (9/9/2015 9:18:00 AM)


    Wonderfully written, Arun. Thank you (Report) Reply

    Arun Maji Arun Maji (9/9/2015 7:12:00 PM)

    you are kind. regards.

  • Paul Warren (9/9/2015 1:45:00 AM)


    Nice one with sentiment thankyou (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 9, 2015


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