If there is contentment
There will be no walls
That divide the rich and the poor.
Like the flow of water
In the river
Contentment guides us
To a common end of
Unity and togetherness.
Like the birds
They fly without anything
They sing for everyone
Expecting nothing in return
Whatever the circumstances.
Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
All three stanzas are one by one excellent thoughts presented in this brilliant poem. Fascinating metaphors in all three verses..Contentment is the keyword in all stanzas. This is most beautifully worded in this fantastic write.
Like the flow of water! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Contentment is unique to one person. What becomes contentment for one will vary by the numbers of people on Earth. Thought provoking.
Contentment would guide us to a common end of unity and togetherness like the rivers in the sea is genuine remark.Excellent write Madam.Very bedt wis
I liked your first two lines as well as the last two lines.Beautiful poem Madam.
Only a great poetess like you, have this in her mind. My hats off for you, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin A poem full of wisdom, it be philosophical, it be metaphorical, but it is true magnificent! A myriad of 10's for this very educative prose poem. Up to MyPoemList (Again? ! Of course, my dear great poetess)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is said that if a man is given all the riches of the world they will still not be enough for him. There is nothing better than contentment if one were to feel happy. A thought-provoking piece.