Convinced Me She Is…. Poem by Nooruddeen Mathilakathveetil

Convinced Me She Is….

Rating: 5.0


Is she an angel?
I asked the stars
They were dubious

The angelic smile,
The ruddy cheek and
Divine magnanimity
Convinced me she is…

Is she a glacier?
I asked the arctic mountains
They were too, dubious

The radiant beauty,
The well carved and
The blazon sculptured features
Convinced me she is…

Is she an icy mountain stream?
I asked the icy mountains
They were too, dubious

The sweet rippling gift of the gab,
The flashy blue eyes and
The wavy hair
Convinced me she is…

Her presence in my infinity dreams,
With all her grace and beauty
Made me a man of desires
Hence, whispered, I love her, I love her,

I Love you.. I Love you.. I cried, as loudly as I could
My love to hear my love
But the winds snatched it and
The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious…

April 16-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lacey Jackson 31 March 2010

Once again, beautiful poem! ..Your gf better feel special(:

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Supriya Prathapan 28 March 2010

Very well written. Wonderful use of imagery.

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Marieta Maglas 18 October 2009

wonderful lyric poem, lovely to read......10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2009

But the winds snatched it and The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious….lovely poem andbeautiful words in it... yu r voice is notherd and lost inwind.. try to rachand convey she may beyopurs.....10 read minea................anywhere....buttrflies around...........beauty

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C. P. Sharma 15 August 2009

Superb poetry........transporting. Excellent craftsmanship. CP

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 24 December 2011

a candid love poem your biography?

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Anita Trivedi 19 May 2010

Very beautiful poem........ loved it

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 13 May 2010

wow this is a beauty of romance... that every lover faces... he wants her still feels that she is too far... to reach... great poem... loved it... very much.... really beautiful...

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Adalie Hettie 17 April 2010

Well I'm convinced..... Beautiful writing!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 April 2010

‘…But the winds snatched it and’ The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious’ Touchy...I’m dumbfounded amongst dubiousness’ Loved it… 10+ Ms. Nivedita Uk

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