Nooruddeen Mathilakathveetil

Convinced Me She Is….

Is she an angel?
I asked the stars
They were dubious

The angelic smile,
The ruddy cheek and
Divine magnanimity
Convinced me she is…

Is she a glacier?
I asked the arctic mountains
They were too, dubious

The radiant beauty,
The well carved and
The blazon sculptured features
Convinced me she is…

Is she an icy mountain stream?
I asked the icy mountains
They were too, dubious

The sweet rippling gift of the gab,
The flashy blue eyes and
The wavy hair
Convinced me she is…

Her presence in my infinity dreams,
With all her grace and beauty
Made me a man of desires
Hence, whispered, I love her, I love her,

I Love you.. I Love you.. I cried, as loudly as I could
My love to hear my love
But the winds snatched it and
The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious…

April 16-2009

Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 16, 2009
Poem Edited: Saturday, April 18, 2009

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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/24/2011 9:03:00 AM)

    a candid love poem
    your biography?

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  • Anita Trivedi (5/19/2010 2:47:00 AM)

    Very beautiful poem........ loved it

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  • Sreejith Kulaparambil (5/13/2010 7:13:00 AM)

    wow this is a beauty of romance... that every lover faces... he wants her still feels that she is too far... to reach...
    great poem... loved it... very much.... really beautiful...

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  • Adalie Hettie (4/17/2010 7:10:00 PM)

    Well I'm convinced..... Beautiful writing!

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (4/9/2010 10:43:00 AM)

    ‘…But the winds snatched it and’
    The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious’

    Touchy...I’m dumbfounded amongst dubiousness’

    Loved it…
    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    Uk

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  • Lacey Jackson (3/31/2010 6:43:00 PM)

    Once again, beautiful poem! ..Your gf better feel special(:

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  • Supriya PrathapanSupriya Prathapan (3/28/2010 8:27:00 AM)

    Very well written. Wonderful use of imagery.

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (10/18/2009 10:00:00 AM)

    wonderful lyric poem, lovely to read......10

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2009 6:45:00 AM)

    But the winds snatched it and
    The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious….lovely poem andbeautiful words in it... yu r voice is notherd and lost inwind.. try to rachand convey she may beyopurs.....10

    read minea................anywhere....buttrflies around...........beauty

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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (8/15/2009 10:08:00 AM)

    Superb poetry........transporting. Excellent craftsmanship.
    CP

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (7/5/2009 1:27:00 PM)

    wonderful and sweet poem filled by that hot feling of love..enjoyed it much..

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  • Shashendra Amalshan (7/5/2009 10:44:00 AM)

    well this is cool, breezy nice write indeed.. filled with emotions..
    i liked it very much! ! !

    with lv
    shan

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  • Amir Forougi (7/4/2009 4:47:00 AM)

    Very heart throbbing one.U wrote exactly in my genre.The loss of the beloved and regret.Manipulated accurately.10

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  • Rommel Mark Marchan (7/3/2009 1:08:00 AM)

    you stir up my emotion seem you are writing in front of me

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  • Jahanvi ....................... (7/1/2009 1:23:00 PM)

    this is really awesome.very true and real

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  • Lynn Glover (6/14/2009 1:18:00 PM)

    Nooruddeen, this is a classic, I like the questions asked in doubt and then answered in love. Great writing. Your friend Lynn

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  • *_sakura ~daisy_* (6/13/2009 11:43:00 PM)

    i like it
    such..powerful opinion
    and makes me wonder so much
    keep writing my friend... :)

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (6/4/2009 7:25:00 AM)

    a lovely poem...well expressed in a way with that imaginative word play..great one...10

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  • Lady Grace (6/3/2009 2:39:00 AM)

    your poem is beautiful.don't convince me anymore coz i know she loves you so..grace

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (5/31/2009 10:23:00 PM)

    This poem is masterfully and imaginatively written in every way. She smiled, she was very beautiful, she was loquacious, but was she perceptive and empathetic? Thanks for a beautiful poem. 10 Karin Anderson

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