Made For Each Other Poem by Nooruddeen Mathilakathveetil

Made For Each Other

Rating: 4.9


I remember the first day I met you,
I caught a glimpse of your face far in the crowd,
Glowing in the diffused golden twilight,
I strode in the seething mass to be near you.

I remember the day I met you again,
You frowned at me in response to my smiling, though,
Ardent longing for your love was burgeoning, I realized,
Aloft flew wishes of a moment alone for you and me, anon.

I remember the day I met you again,
You flung a glowing smile to me and walked away,
And you fondled me again by eying me furtively paces after,
A golden era was blossoming out as ever I wished.

I remember the day we lusciously conversed,
Your sweet rippling still echoes again and again,
Many a time exchanged our thoughts of love at our rendezvous,
By the sweet singing, lonesome, white, rippling brook.

I remember we saying “The day is only for you and me, ”
“We are the only two in this glebe; the glebe is only for us, ”
Smothered around us the halo of our love,
We could see nothing but us, we could hearken nothing but ours.

March 30,2010 - Perinnanam

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pashya Inamdar 09 June 2010

Beautiful....well worded..

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Jasmin Jimenez 06 June 2010

What a lovely poem...

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We are the only two in this glebe; the glebe is only for us, ” Smothered around us the halo of our love, We could see nothing but us, we could hearken nothing but ours.... nicely worded poems and felt from within.. it should result into happy uniosn as it leads to happy conclusion.. i liked it...10 read mine.. i miss. love at first sight

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Allyson Jenkinson 03 June 2010

Beautiful poem, from first attraction to loving growing stronger and finally fulfilled. Your poem made me feel good.10

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Tim Cook 03 June 2010

it is easy to relate to this poem i reckon. I think you would like my poem summer queen.

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Chinedu Dike 11 February 2022

Beautiful and very compassionate write.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 June 2020

Such a nice poem, Nooruddeen. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Mz February 09 December 2011

Very sweet, 'Aloft flew wishes of a moment alone for you and me, anon' you've used the structure to great effect in this poem, again sorry its taken me over a year to get round to it x

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JH Poetry 27 October 2010

This was a lovely flow of passion. 'Oh how the ripples merge as one' aka JHpoetry

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Justin La Plant 18 June 2010

Indeed your choice of words is wonderful for visualization, and I personally love the development of the poem. Exceptional as always.

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