I remember the first day I met you,
I caught a glimpse of your face far in the crowd,
Glowing in the diffused golden twilight,
I strode in the seething mass to be near you.
I remember the day I met you again,
You frowned at me in response to my smiling, though,
Ardent longing for your love was burgeoning, I realized,
Aloft flew wishes of a moment alone for you and me, anon.
I remember the day I met you again,
You flung a glowing smile to me and walked away,
And you fondled me again by eying me furtively paces after,
A golden era was blossoming out as ever I wished.
I remember the day we lusciously conversed,
Your sweet rippling still echoes again and again,
Many a time exchanged our thoughts of love at our rendezvous,
By the sweet singing, lonesome, white, rippling brook.
I remember we saying “The day is only for you and me, ”
“We are the only two in this glebe; the glebe is only for us, ”
Smothered around us the halo of our love,
We could see nothing but us, we could hearken nothing but ours.
March 30,2010 - Perinnanam
‘…We could see nothing but us, we could hearken nothing but ours.’ Sparkling finish after cascade of ‘I remember’ Thanks Sir...this poetry gotten a final eventuality with brilliance.. Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
Hi Noordeen, at last, you are now (near) by sweet singing, lonesome, white, rippling brook......having luscious rendezvous with tropical life ……. the LOVE; breeding from your compassion is exemplary.. hit upon the contentment in the loneliness of two... a poem well written.. far-fetched…..Voted 10+ -Jaleel
Really the two person in this poem are made for eachother........ very wel crafted poem. will give u 9
Very well crafted, in this poem two of them are made for each other...Liked it. Thanks for sharing....10+++
Such a nice poem, Nooruddeen. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.
Very sweet, 'Aloft flew wishes of a moment alone for you and me, anon' you've used the structure to great effect in this poem, again sorry its taken me over a year to get round to it x
This was a lovely flow of passion. 'Oh how the ripples merge as one' aka JHpoetry
Indeed your choice of words is wonderful for visualization, and I personally love the development of the poem. Exceptional as always.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Technical very strong!