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Smudge Of Blood

Rating: 4.7

Here, this smudge of blood,
Of a tender boy of eleven,
Soaked thru the tarmac,
Yet to be dried, still wet and warm!

An innocent young lad,
Fades-in my mind,
Your bag! Your bag!
Picking up a shopping bag,
Shouting and chasing the biker,

Who slings the bag into the crowd,
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Unnikrishnan E S 06 January 2021

Terrorism despised

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Farisa Haleel 04 May 2016

Nice way of presentation and choosing of words made this poem perfect...and touched my heart....

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Elisha Wall 20 January 2015

Looking at the evil heart of men and the work of their cruelty! My heart weeps for the mother of the child. Thanks for sharing this tragic poem. Not only do we as poets share the good times and the beautiful moments, but sad times as this.

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Vishal Sharma 09 July 2013

most commented poem on poemhunter i think

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the situation is entirely written with profound of quest - thought of slaughtering the innocent for reaping crooked desires by the sloths in dark side of the world......the content holds true emotions along with the mode of words.

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Johnathan Juarez 16 May 2012

really good grasp on the story

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Really it's a touching one. blood steaming lines............wonderful, Nooredeen ji.

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Jeska bella 21 March 2012

hay nice can you read and coment on mine plz thanks jeska

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Poet Dragon 15 March 2012

Great imagery...reads like it might make a better short story :)

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Mz February 09 December 2011

That is a very powerful piece of poetry you have there, I like the emphasis on his innoncence, sorry its taken me over a year to get back to you :)

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