Nooruddeen Mathilakathveetil

Convinced Me She Is….

Rating: 5.0
Is she an angel?
I asked the stars
They were dubious
The angelic smile,
The ruddy cheek and
Divine magnanimity
Convinced me she is…

Is she a glacier?
I asked the arctic mountains
They were too, dubious

The radiant beauty,
The well carved and
The blazon sculptured features
Convinced me she is…

Is she an icy mountain stream?
I asked the icy mountains
They were too, dubious

The sweet rippling gift of the gab,
The flashy blue eyes and
The wavy hair
Convinced me she is…

Her presence in my infinity dreams,
With all her grace and beauty
Made me a man of desires
Hence, whispered, I love her, I love her,

I Love you.. I Love you.. I cried, as loudly as I could
My love to hear my love
But the winds snatched it and
The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious…

April 16-2009
Thursday, April 16, 2009
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 24 December 2011
a candid love poem your biography?
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Anita Trivedi 19 May 2010
Very beautiful poem........ loved it
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wow this is a beauty of romance... that every lover faces... he wants her still feels that she is too far... to reach... great poem... loved it... very much.... really beautiful...
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Adalie Hettie 17 April 2010
Well I'm convinced..... Beautiful writing!
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‘…But the winds snatched it and’ The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious’ Touchy...I’m dumbfounded amongst dubiousness’ Loved it… 10+ Ms. Nivedita Uk
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Lacey Jackson 31 March 2010
Once again, beautiful poem! ..Your gf better feel special(:
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Supriya Prathapan 28 March 2010
Very well written. Wonderful use of imagery.
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Marieta Maglas 18 October 2009
wonderful lyric poem, lovely to read......10
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2009
But the winds snatched it and The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious….lovely poem andbeautiful words in it... yu r voice is notherd and lost inwind.. try to rachand convey she may beyopurs.....10 read minea................anywhere....buttrflies
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C. P. Sharma 15 August 2009
Superb poetry........transporting. Excellent craftsmanship. CP
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