Is she an angel?
I asked the stars
They were dubious
The angelic smile,
The ruddy cheek and
Divine magnanimity
Convinced me she is…
Is she a glacier?
I asked the arctic mountains
They were too, dubious
The radiant beauty,
The well carved and
The blazon sculptured features
Convinced me she is…
Is she an icy mountain stream?
I asked the icy mountains
They were too, dubious
The sweet rippling gift of the gab,
The flashy blue eyes and
The wavy hair
Convinced me she is…
Her presence in my infinity dreams,
With all her grace and beauty
Made me a man of desires
Hence, whispered, I love her, I love her,
I Love you.. I Love you.. I cried, as loudly as I could
My love to hear my love
But the winds snatched it and
The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious…
April 16-2009
you stir up my emotion seem you are writing in front of me
Very heart throbbing one.U wrote exactly in my genre.The loss of the beloved and regret.Manipulated accurately.10
well this is cool, breezy nice write indeed.. filled with emotions.. i liked it very much! ! ! with lv shan
wonderful and sweet poem filled by that hot feling of love..enjoyed it much..
wow this is a beauty of romance... that every lover faces... he wants her still feels that she is too far... to reach... great poem... loved it... very much.... really beautiful...
‘…But the winds snatched it and’ The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious’ Touchy...I’m dumbfounded amongst dubiousness’ Loved it… 10+ Ms. Nivedita Uk
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is really awesome.very true and real