Cookie Monster Poem by Practicing Poetess

Cookie Monster

Rating: 5.0


One of 3 short poems on the Total Solar Eclipse of 2017, the first such eclipse in 99 years!

Who took a bite out
Of the giant, luminescent cookie?
A space giant, obviously!
Or perhaps a Cookie Monster?

Monday, August 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: moon,space,sun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Listen to Cat Stevens' song 'Moonshadow' from 1971.
'I'm being followed by a Moonshadow.'
Great accompaniment to the eclipse!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 February 2018

as our first President (of USA) was reported to say as a boy after chopping down a cherry tree: I can not tell a lie. (he did chop the tree i guess) but i wasn't there, so i can't say for sure. : ( so: I can not tell a lie! i, Bri, took the bite, and.......WOW! ! ! ..........it was some hot cookie! ! ! bri :)

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Practicing Poetess 02 February 2018

It was hot, all right! Goes to show what you get for biting the sun! : p Thanks, Bri, for commenting, and for your unique sense of humour!

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Rebecca Navarre 21 August 2017

Cool! ! ! ! ! Fun! ! ! ! ! Cute! ! ! ! ! Luminescent Cookie! ! ! ! ! Awesome! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Moonshadow, I'll Have To Check That Out! ! ! ! ! Off Hand Not Sure If I Remember That One...Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! !

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Practicing Poetess 21 August 2017

When the moon just begins to obstruct the view of the sun, it really DOES look like a giant glowing cookie with a bite missing. Go to NASA's website to view images. Thank you, Becca, for appreciating my little Eclipse series!

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