.cooperation (Haiku) Poem by C R Clark

.cooperation (Haiku)

Rating: 3.1


Squirrel brushes corn
From my feeder to the ground
Young deer picks it up

© C R Clark 1/15/2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonny Rainshine 17 January 2009

Fine rendering of one of my favorite styles of poetry. Haiku are deceptively simple, but are very hard to compose in the English language. I love the way this one describes the whole cycle of life in three lines. Nice work. I also like your haiku about camping and it's touch of humor about how it having been so long since you went camping and the implications thereof.

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Fiona Davidson 17 January 2009

Nice visuals here...love it...Fi

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Ivor Hogg 17 January 2009

Photographic clarity A snapshot freezing the moment

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squirrel is the deer's cook is it

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 06 February 2009

Cute and that's real natural selection! Loyd

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

inspiring...cooperation, selfless and unconditional!

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Barry A. Lanier 26 January 2009

A moment frozen in time with a few words so eloquently penned.bravo

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 January 2009

This silent cooperation reflects the cycle of life as well.

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