.cooperation (Haiku) Poem by C R Clark

.cooperation (Haiku)

Rating: 3.1


Squirrel brushes corn
From my feeder to the ground
Young deer picks it up

© C R Clark 1/15/2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivor Hogg 17 January 2009

Photographic clarity A snapshot freezing the moment

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Fiona Davidson 17 January 2009

Nice visuals here...love it...Fi

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Sonny Rainshine 17 January 2009

Fine rendering of one of my favorite styles of poetry. Haiku are deceptively simple, but are very hard to compose in the English language. I love the way this one describes the whole cycle of life in three lines. Nice work. I also like your haiku about camping and it's touch of humor about how it having been so long since you went camping and the implications thereof.

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squirrel is the deer's cook is it

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 06 February 2009

Cute and that's real natural selection! Loyd

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

inspiring...cooperation, selfless and unconditional!

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Barry A. Lanier 26 January 2009

A moment frozen in time with a few words so eloquently penned.bravo

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 January 2009

This silent cooperation reflects the cycle of life as well.

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