Squirrel brushes corn
From my feeder to the ground
Young deer picks it up
© C R Clark 1/15/2008
Fine rendering of one of my favorite styles of poetry. Haiku are deceptively simple, but are very hard to compose in the English language. I love the way this one describes the whole cycle of life in three lines. Nice work. I also like your haiku about camping and it's touch of humor about how it having been so long since you went camping and the implications thereof.
A moment frozen in time with a few words so eloquently penned.bravo
This silent cooperation reflects the cycle of life as well.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Photographic clarity A snapshot freezing the moment