Crescent Poem by Nosheen Irfan


Rating: 5.0

From a distance
of a thousand miles
We see you smile
in the desolation
of a fading sky
A slight but comforting
gleam of hope
in the growing darkness
around us.

Nosheen Irfan © 2016

Monday, April 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: light,nature
Ramesh Rai 25 April 2016

Beautiful soft and heart soothing write. Enjoyed the poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 April 2016

We see you smile! ! Taking a mile with life. Nice work.

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Barry Middleton 25 April 2016

A beautiful metaphor of how a tiny sliver of light adds hope to darkness.

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Valsa George 25 April 2016

The crescent moon stands out as beacon in the surrounding darkness! Crisp and lovely!

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Rajnish Manga 30 January 2019

gleam of hope in the growing darkness around us.... //.... A bright crescent against a dark sky gives rise to optimism and hope. Thanks for the poem and the picture of the evening sky. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 May 2016

Gleam of light! ! Joy to the heart. Nice piece of work.

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Edmund Strolis 01 May 2016

Yes there is comfort in the smile a traveler in the fading sky. This light speaks to the subtle beauty, soft as an eternal whisper. More so than the shimmering face of the full moon, brilliant and stark.

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Aarzoo Mehek 29 April 2016

A little light is enough to banish all the darkness. Beautiful poem Nosheen.10+++

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Igwilo Vincent Somto 29 April 2016

Wonderful poem there Nosheen, how beautiful of you to view the shape of a moon as a smile

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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