Complex Love Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Complex Love



My love like a subclause
Is put on hold
For no clause would join it
I am in search of a simple sentence
Capable of defining love
But you try to make it complex
Always waiting for the other part
Never standing on its own
No wonder my love remains
Subordinate
Thanks to your inclination
For complicated things.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The idea of this poem has come from the grammar topic of dependent and independent clauses in Complex Sentences.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 26 February 2023

Beautiful ink. Simple love is beautiful love. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 June 2023

Your love is a subordinate clause but you can't deny that it's a part of the main clause. Absolutely a wonderful poem.

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David Wood 02 June 2023

And there can be nothing more complicated than love!

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Pallavi Tripathi 02 June 2023

Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 June 2023

Bravo my friend and fellow poet Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 02 June 2023

This is simply brilliant work......thanks for sharing.....

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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