Crimson Hymns Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Crimson Hymns

Rating: 5.0


White snow
On the eaves,
Crimson hymns
I won’t hum
Not

Behind the doors
I lost
Under a covering
Of frost
Golden memories
Not

Arctic and shivering
Tropic and sweating
I won’t follow you
Not

Blades and bleeding
Thorns and thrilling
I will leave you
Not

Nightingale in the cage
Red rose on the stage
I won’t smell you
Not


2010/1/7

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 07 January 2010

well written lovely words 10

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Anjali Sinha 15 January 2010

wowwww Amir, yours is like cooing in my ears a lovely song of the Nightingale -10 anjali

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Emma Adamyan 11 January 2010

wow Amir! that`s the style, that`s the passion. a real ocean of emotion penned in unsusual simple way. i liked this 'i will leave u NOT' :)

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Marilyn Lott 08 January 2010

Your unique style adds a lovely demension to this poem. I enjoyed it. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Tsira Goge 08 January 2010

Sad song of Nightingale which only afflicts the rose... And the nightingale only waits - who will dare to open a gold cage nearby the Shah, good luck to red rose, Nightingale ...10.... Tsira

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Sandra Fowler 08 January 2010

Passionately lyric. Beautiful write. 10/10. Always, Sandra

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