Per. Nig.


Commencement Hour - Poem by Per. Nig.

Thirsty water
Twisting flower

Everywhere fire
Extinction inspire

Strange thunder
Love in wonder

Lord’s power
Commencement
Hour

(2008/4/14)


Comments about Commencement Hour by Per. Nig.

  • (4/18/2008 7:28:00 PM)


    Very adroit and well-phrased. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/17/2008 9:04:00 PM)


    The epithets are very meaningful with perfect rhyming…loved reading it (Report) Reply

  • (4/17/2008 6:35:00 AM)


    what a wonderful msg. thanks........................ (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2008 7:53:00 PM)


    Lovely read indeed Shiraz, great share, well executed! ! ! *10*! !
    Best regards! Friend Thad
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  • (4/14/2008 2:32:00 PM)


    Very nice! I'm surprised by this limerick! Proud of you, my nightingale! (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2008 4:44:00 AM)


    Very, very beautifully captured picture of a great event that is 'in the air' and that is felt soon to take off... (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2008 4:14:00 AM)


    Great writing Persian, enjoyed it, so concise but full of words,
    Lynda xx
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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 14, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 17, 2008


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