Cruel Fate Poem by Jaishree Nair

Cruel Fate

Rating: 5.0


Unaware of the tragic news awaiting,
Reached the institution duty bound,
The death of an angel confirmed;
Just a tiny -weeny tot in the third level

Leukaemia at the last stage...
The doctors had diagnosed...
Too frail to withstand the treatment
This bud severed alas.! ! ! !
Before blossoming.

Mind refused to register the loss;
A mixture of emotions surged
Groping for words to console the parents appalled.....
dumping us in gloom dark...

Cursed the fate so cruel....
to take life away ere living
Dreams unachieved and ambitions sealed
Aspirations crushed before blossoming.

A rose withered and fallen in a garden
matters to the gardener most;
Each flower just as precious
as the one next to the other.

May her soul rest in peace
May God help the others to brave the loss
And hope time the best remedial factor
Will play its role in healing the wound sore!

Wednesday, May 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 03 June 2015

It is one thing we can not postpone.A nice poem describing death of a budding talent.Liked it.

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Roseann Shawiak 22 May 2015

A very heartfelt and touching poem, honoring this little child who is no more. Absolutely loved how you described this little one's precious life with these lines: A rose withered and fallen in a garden matters to the gardener most Each flower just as precious as the one next to the other. Amazing poem, Jaishree! Give you a 10! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 May 2015

Cursed the fate so cruel.... to take life away ere living Dreams unachieved and ambitions sealed Aspirations crushed before blossoming.......Really, it happens sometimes. Very nicely and aptly envisioned. Many thanks dear madam, keep the ball rolling.

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