Cruel Joke Poem by Mary Nagy

Cruel Joke



Was it just a cruel joke
or did you feel the same?
How could you kill a grown man's soul?
Why did you play this game?

He says he'd still forgive you.
I pray he NEVER will.
No matter how much pain you've felt,
I HOPE YOU FEEL MORE STILL! !

I hope you carry the torture
with you for all your days.
I hope your life is MISERABLE
just like you wanted Ray's.

They say that God will punish
and make you feel the shame.
For what you've done was heartless
and there's ONLY YOU TO BLAME!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Gerardino 31 March 2005

love is a three minute song............but not for me........

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Richard A. Davis SR. 26 April 2005

Simply put, -'Powerful'! ! !

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Herbert Nehrlich1 27 May 2005

Strong stuff, well put. H

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Michelle Pope 11 August 2005

wow! ! ! I like how you write what you feel -Shell

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Kia Seales 29 March 2006

wow where I come from we call some one like that a (BITCH) no offence to any ladys out there but she is another good one Super

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I''m increasingly taken that your powerful emotions are expressed so vividly and within such a flowing structure. Superb.

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Lori Boulard 08 October 2005

Wow, Mary, I'm shocked - some strong words for you. Deep breath...exhale. :) Isn't poetry therapeutic? And it's free!

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Mary Nagy 09 September 2005

This is about a woman that married my brother after convincing him it would be forever....it lasted around 3 weeks. She just decided she 'couldn't do it'. To me, this is cruel. My other poem 'To Ray and Chris' was what I wrote for them when he told me they were getting married...................Mary

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Don Stratford 05 September 2005

Hey Mary this is very strong and says it how it is

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