Cry Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

Cry

Rating: 4.8


Once upon a time,
We walked with hand in hand
Over the grazing fields,
With grins and blushes
Splashing all over us.
A hut nearby
Speaks to me still,
In silent notes,
With the green fields
And the soothing winds
Kissing my soul over and over.
I still live today for you
Looking at the distant horizon
With smiles and tears,
Under the Sun
Trying to touch your invisible shadow
With my far cry
And seeking to change
The story of no return.

Copyright © 2013 Indranil Bhaduri

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 12 July 2013

beautiful..a cry from heart bravo sir

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Sandra Kelley 15 July 2013

losing someone you love hurts, I'm young but I know it does

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Bob Brown 16 July 2013

Can feel the pathos in the lines.. good one.

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Dinesan Madathil 19 July 2013

The nostalgia over your lost love is painful but sweet here. But I think the title can be modified a little differently.

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Hazel Durham 20 July 2013

Beautiful memories linger forever with a love that never ends and the terrible pain of losing! ! So deep with a haunting beauty! !

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Nice and beautiful poem.

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Kalpana Shah 28 August 2013

Liked the starting and ending lines.... Nyce write!

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Heather Wilkins 23 August 2013

a beautiful write sad but well written with a lot of emotion.

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Beach Girl 13 August 2013

Lovely poem Indranil! It truly imparts yearnings for a lost love and the heart's hollow feelings of a love that can't be replaced.

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Simon Odhiambo 13 August 2013

Very nostalgic...my eyes are glassy.

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