Summer Sandercox

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Cry Beautiful - Poem by Summer Sandercox

Tears are falling,
From beautiful eyes.
Tears are falling,
Because of beautiful lies.

Tears are falling,
Because of what you said.
Tears are falling,
Onto a beautiful bed.

Tears are falling,
In a beautiful stream.
Tears are falling,
Because of a beautiful dream.

Tears are falling,
Because of your lies.
Tears are falling,
As beautiful dies.

Comments about Cry Beautiful by Summer Sandercox

  • (1/31/2017 1:20:00 AM)

    This poem is an extraordinary example of how the repetition of a word can be extremely effective. The word beautiful culminated in a death. An ingenious poem. Excellent, Summer! (Report) Reply

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/4/2015 2:35:00 AM)

    Those who lie must cry yet love is like a rose with thorn we have to accept the truth (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (2/4/2014 6:30:00 PM)

    A lovely write Summer, it was the title that brought me to open these Beautiful words. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2014 3:16:00 PM)

    Great serene flow (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2014 1:01:00 PM)

    Wow! Excellent write! Those tears.... they burn tracks as they roll down. (HUGE HUG) (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu (2/4/2014 8:20:00 AM)

    Wodo the poeterful poem full of imageries. Kudos t (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2013 5:48:00 PM)

    This poem is so sad... and sweet... (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2013 11:24:00 AM)

    a very breathtaking, beautiful poem :) (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2013 4:02:00 AM)

    As beautiful dies, how poetic, indeed a very sweet composition, sweeter than cane sugar. How well have you trapped the dying of something beautiful which in most cases is the death of a perception, a sensation a thought, an impression. It is indeed quite an enigma how great importance perceptions, and images hold in our lives and this poem so succinctly summarises it. (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2008 3:42:00 PM)

    I really liked this a lot! Very beautiful just beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • (1/25/2008 11:18:00 AM)

    Wow... amazing, the last line really sealed the deal for me. It's so good. (Report) Reply

  • (9/29/2007 7:53:00 PM)

    I love this poem, how things that are not beautiful can be described as beautiful, and you can understand how they would be that way.

    -Storm (Violet)
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  • (7/17/2007 12:45:00 AM)

    WOW thats all i can say WOW! !
    loved it WOW.
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  • (5/14/2007 9:31:00 PM)

    God I love this, it struck me hard, please keep writing, I'd love to see more. (Report) Reply

  • (3/22/2007 9:43:00 AM)

    Lovely. I would say more, but what more needs to be said? Just wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • (3/21/2007 4:18:00 PM)

    wow this is one of my favourites keep writing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 21, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, February 4, 2011

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