Crying In The Rain Poem by Meena Mustafa

Crying In The Rain

Rating: 5.0

The night it was pouring
I sat by my bed
Hoping to find answers
That grew in my head
I looked out through the window
And nothing could I see
Besides the rain that poured
And brought misery
Lost in my thoughts
I searched for some clues
What was I thinking
As tears fell through
So many questions came to my mind
From past to present...none could I find
So I stepped out in the rain where none could see me cry
Besides thunder and lightening that would come and go by.....

Shouvik Roy 26 July 2012

nice visuals..good rhyming scheme..the flow of emotions and grief is visible..this is really good.. :) nice.. :)

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Simon Odhiambo 09 August 2012

A good one for my afternoon. well said.

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Jo George 28 July 2012

beautiful delivery dear poetess, enjoyed reading it again and again, especially the last two lines.

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Romeo Della Valle 26 July 2012

Like the famous song says: Big Girls Don't Cry but you did and so the heavens cried too along with you! Beauty and Talent magically merged in this beautiful write embedded with touching rhyming words and rich imagery! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Saadat Tahir 26 July 2012

beautiful rhyming piece to your credit.... using simple English and creating such a beauty is masterly wow you

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Valerie Dohren 26 July 2012

We've still got bucketfuls of the stuff here in GB, so if I want to have a jolly good cry, no-one would know! ! Seriously though Meena, this is a lovely poem, very well written and the rhyming is just great, so it's well done you and a 10.

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