It's All About You Poem by Meena Mustafa

It's All About You

Rating: 4.4


Let me name this feeling, it's all about you
My lonely world is lit up I can see it through
I just keep thinking and wish upon a star
For a message in a bottle to come from far
Someday I know, our winding paths will meet
Every tearful moment that we have revealed
Now I dream of a rainbow, bright in the sky
Stay with me forever...I've nothing to lie
We'll sail the seas together and stars that shine up high
Ardent breeze of harmony and your touch brushing me by
Whisper, the speech of tireless lips into my ears will flow
Your caresses and kisses will gently make me glow
Love is like a dream so I still stay in wonder
Shall I stay asleep...or awake from its thunder

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 27 July 2012

your poem is stunningly simple.....romantically speaks of overflowing love, the fount of youth overflows and cupid has his bow ready… i have no doubt...you are a much better poet then professed poets like myself at least.. The easy charm and flow in your poems is so uncanny and natural...i am sure like me many are spurred with envy :) sat

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Payal Parande 28 July 2012

such a romantic piece so full of emotion and love.......loved it want to say more but no matter what i say it would be less so just one word perfect thank you for sharing it, payal

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Romeo Della Valle 28 July 2012

Once again, Beauty and Talent magically filtered in this beautiful and very romantic write, well penned and poignant! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! I have just posted a couple poems and it would be a great honor to get your valuable feedback in any of them! Romeo-NYC

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Danny Draper 30 July 2012

The romantic theme is nicely portrayed in this piece.

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Valerie Dohren 27 July 2012

Another beautiful poem Meena, very romantic with some lovely lines.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 September 2014

Love is like a dream so I still stay in wonder Shall I stay asleep...or awake from its thunder Hope of a positive response in love shows the intensity of love, and the intense love has created this beautiful poem.

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Marcus Mckinley 05 August 2012

what tender dreams these soft lips weave into the ears of sleeping thieves in the moment of waking my speech encumber 'tis my heart you stole amid your slumber

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Heather Wilson 31 July 2012

beautiful poem, romance flows from it like honey, loved it.

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Let me name this feeling, it's all about you My lonely world is lit up I can see it through.... beautiful lines.. i loved it...10 opening lines captured me i felt little easy and free was the love at first sight? when i read your poem and felt right

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Osama Waqar 30 July 2012

nothing less than an adventurous romance.............. extremely beautiful..........

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