Crystal Heal Poem by Candy Transcends

Crystal Heal

Rating: 3.1

Red rays to the right
Blue sparks to the left
Yellows hue in the center shining bright
Black shadows of torment in your mind
Orange rusty memories fade
Silver stars beacon for you to find
Green bounty of nature to enjoy and explore
Gray clouds of sadness be gone
White lights are cast to heal your core

Theodora Onken 14 August 2005

SO, I have to admit it, I really like this one! I have read it over and over! Wow!

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Mary Nagy 29 August 2005

I agree...this is such a beautiful use of colors in a poem. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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Godfrey Morris 03 July 2015

Colourful work of art.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 03 July 2015

So colorful, beautiful and wonderful. Nice piece

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Chinedu Dike 03 July 2015

Lovely and well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with insight. Powerful usage of colours in connotative sense and as adjectives to drive home the conviction of the poem is lovely and poetically remarkable. A good one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 July 2015

Red rays! With the muse of life and colours. Nice work.

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Poison 9901 12 October 2007

Needless to say, this is a very colorful poem. Very nice indeed, and it flowed very well. Thank you Candy for shareing this one. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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