I am your garden,
Cultivate me.
...............
Clear out all the doubt-weeds,
Burn all the fear, ...........
Feed me with tenderness.
And water me carefully
With measured out time.
............ ......
Neglect will not endear me.
Good husbandry uses only limed
Heated and readied ground,
Which never needs
Fencing around.......
Tended, I will stay in line.
.............
So cultivate boundaries
Smoothe indeed, .........
And waiting for seed
Will be soil, that ploughed,
Will fruit and flower again.
..............................
You will certainly be amazed.
Spoilage will never becloud
Our horizon.................
Nectar you'll sip.......... daily.
Flora will bless with yield
Such a fine garden.
Please husband me wisely,
Then she can visit again.
The garden of love, cultivate then stand back and watch what happens, great write as always Fay, 10 Lynda xx
Fay, a faultless piece of poetry. Love the use of the shorter lines. There is much to admire in the way you have used personification. A favourite read for me. Ian
Wonderful piece Fay as always from you an excellent read...Fi 10+++
I am your garden, Cultivate me. This is the bud that blooms into a flower with its fragrance and hue in the rest of the poem. Poetry par excellence.10++++++++ CP
a wonderful poem...love and romance filled garden...great read
excellent warm poem..the most beautiful garden which nurtured by cariing and love, ..sweetly said poem So cultivate boundaries Smoothe indeed, ......... And waiting for seed Will be soil, that ploughed, Will fruit and flower again. .............................. You will certainly be amazed. Spoilage will never becloud Our horizon................. Nectar you'll sip.......... daily.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
When the moon is bright, the time is right, for the sowing of the seed warmth and tenderness are needed, its generally agreed protection from harm and the elements, is a necessity only then will we reap the love we gave, that blooms eternally