Cupid's Sting Poem by Valsa George
Cupid's Sting
You stood before me, a rose in full bloom
Lips red, ripe cherries wet with moisture
I kissed away the ambrosial liquid
Inhaled your scent
It filtered into all sinews of my being
Seeping right down to my bone
Within me bloomed a thousand flowers
There on, whatever dreams I had
Were of yours
Whatever songs I tuned
Were all about you
In my dreams, I walked with you
We roamed along the Milky way
And danced with the virgin stars
We together watched the russet sky
Adrift on the ocean of emotions
Through the meadows and woods, we rambled free
Heard the songs of birds chanting of love
You filled every atom and every fibre in me
And lifted me to an irrepressible buoyancy
I saw the still waters reflecting your image
I heard the breeze whispering your name
I sensed a tuneful melody in every cosmic beat
I saw the universe painted in many hues
With startling vividness when you come into me
Each time I feel the sweet sting of Cupid’s shafts!
In no way, I will barter this sweet ache
For any other treasures of the world!
V.G's heart opens out. the poets on love must withdraw in awe.
Who else, other than a person of thickened poetic fibers, can reawaken romantic feelings of romantic youth, at maturity, so freshly, vividly and heartily. It's a beautiful portrait of a real romantic encounter. Enjoyed and its 10 from me.
I sensed a tuneful melody in every cosmic beat I saw the universe painted in many hues....romantic feelings flow here and in every lines of the poem. Thrilling one. Many thanks for sharing.....10
With startling vividness when you come into me/Each time I feel the sweet sting of Cupid’s shafts! Great romantic expression! An endearing piece of work dear madam......Top score!
I kissed away the ambrosial liquid Inhaled your scent It filtered into all sinews of my being Seeping right down to my bone.. such beautiful romantic expressions that flows down from heart full of love. love your poems. tony
''In no way, I will barter this sweet ache For any other treasures of the world! '' - I love this two verses! This ode is of a refined poetic beauty, with images and emotions of such profundity, which only Love can reach! An exquisite poem!
Why don't you write such beautiful poems more, it's beautiful and wonderful.................10
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4/19/2024 6:52:44 AM # 1.0.0.1119
WOW' Valsa -It's a beautiful penning describing love bite. I write some few lines from one of my poems - Though it may be a sting from naughty Cupid, But undoubtedly that gives a tangy and sweet pain. A matured human heart yearns that arrow's sting To be penetrated again and again.
Thank you Amitava! Yes, your poem and mine sound so similar! Enjoyed your lines!