Dairies Of Us Is That Soul Of Mars Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

Dairies Of Us Is That Soul Of Mars

Rating: 5.0


Summer always wasn't strange and especial for me

It was just a time to fit my empty feeling, thinking about my own soul feeding and be sting by small bee

With my short way of looking and those stubborn ideas I was just passing my ways

Nothing was remaining from past, idiot days!

In that summer everything changed good

I get familiar with three people, and then we had our brother hood

One was a mentor, a lord with ultra superior way of thinking,

When he talked, the only sound that you could hear was the voice of our blinking

He was powerful and strong….he was a master

He could pass the whole galaxy with a simple caster!

He wasn't like others; he was a great soul, a beautiful creature

A great man who was like a gift from nature

One was a man of loyal and green honor

He was cute though, he always act brave like an old honest gunner

He always thinks about breaking a cage of stupid life

He wanted to go out, he just wanted to live without hearing any lies, he wanted to be alive

He was thirsty for freedom and he concern for others,

As I remember, he was so kind, he never bothers!

And…the other is my best ever and of all…he is the meaning of an unknown color

Great and lovely, cute and honor

He is unique, there is no word about him

When I think of him, my heart starts to beam

He is that great gift for me from God, the soul of prideful and noble mars

Those days never die, the dairy of three men, I mean us

We three will never get separate; we are members of a united part

Our dairies are always alive; our dairies are in our loyal hearts!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i offer this poem to three person that i love the most(but one is the best of all_M.A.)
1_ soul of mars
2_Martin
3_ devout, the brave!
i love you where ever you are, you are always in my heart.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 24 February 2013

C. A, do you mean diary and diaries? dairy and dairies refer to cow farms (at least in the united states!) . our milk, which we purchase in grocery stores, comes from a dairy/dairies. again, i enjoyed the poem enough to finish it but had trouble understanding it due, in large part, to the way you write/speak english. i'm glad i don't have to be proficient in a second language. thanks for sharing! bri

0 0 Reply
Nader Baheri 20 August 2012

nice piece of written.you have sacrificed thr rhyme for the meaning.nice job pal.

0 0 Reply
Bella Hernandez 11 August 2012

Very meaningful n splendid was a joy to read :) keep it up ~Bella

0 0 Reply
Terry O'leary 07 August 2012

Very beautiful hommage to special people... splendid poem... Terry

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

Iran, Islamic republic of
Close
Error Success