In the unknown dark abyss of mind
When gloom and frustration twined
Which you oftentimes couldn't escape
Those things clothed in black drape
And into the mind's deep recess
In which you have so little access
Where resides stress or depression
That causes an upheaval in emotion
If only you can have strict control
Keep negative thoughts on a patrol
And your mind gains immense clarity
These are an evolved person's quality
And this is also unquestionably true
Strength and abilities are within you
Besides your insight, the rhyme and rhythm of the poem are poetic devices to admire. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Bipasha.
Hi Bipasha Bhagawathi Gita says Uddharet aatman aatmanam Na aatamanam avasadayet Aatmasya hi aatmano Bandhur- aatmaiva ripuratmana. You also tend to say the same in this poem. Great reading...
Fine and lofty verse with rhythmic splendour. Poignant work of art, elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Awesome creation from a sober and an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing Bipasha and do remain enriched.
Into the mind's deep recess! ! But to press on with the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A motivating piece of with a precise message! The third stanza is the epitome! Thanks for sharing. 10
Thank you so much for reading, commenting and giving such generous rating.