David Harris

Gold Star - 4,611 Points (18 June 1945 / Bradfield, England)

Darker Than Amber - Poem by David Harris

Her eyes were
much darker than amber
as she beckoned to me
to come to her open arms
and live within them
for all eternity.

16 June 2008

Comments about Darker Than Amber by David Harris

  • (6/17/2008 4:57:00 PM)

    Never have so few words said so much... Andy 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Ernestine Northover (6/17/2008 3:36:00 PM)

    A great statement David, so much said in so few lines. Very moving piece of writing. Excellent.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XX
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  • (6/17/2008 10:27:00 AM)

    It's shortness only left me wanting MORE! Beautiful! ! (Report) Reply

  • (6/17/2008 10:08:00 AM)

    I could not resist the simplicity of this poem. It says so much in so few words. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 17, 2008

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