My daydream is to walk one day
hand-in-hand with a lover
on a lonely beach.
But I am scared
if she ask me to remove the shoes
for convenience.
to the lovers who go hand-in-hand.
Clothes maketh the man. A lovely poinient piece Nimal. just enough words to say what has to be said.
If she looks closely she will see that it is the socks that were darned with such care and not the polish that tried to hide them, that really matters Love duncan X
A bit wistful and vulnerable. But daydreams are fragile at best. The power of the poet's rich imagination is always at his disposal.He can simply paint another dreamscape that is more favorable to his mood. A very fine poem, Nimal. Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You are a ROCKSTAR! Such well written poem. Preets