Julie Smith

Gold Star - 5,816 Points (21st March)

Date Time - Poem by Julie Smith

Hear the clocks ticking, from dusk 'til night
The time is running, will it be on my side?
When the clock strikes nine I will be just fine
Because this is the time that you will be mine

Set a date, Darling, and don't go astray
'cause if you do you'll get lost underway
Counting the hours I can't run away
Afraid to miss you I am forced to stay

Time goes too slow when you are not there
The sun goes up and I keep wondering where
You are, you will be and where you were
I turn and I smile when I see you're right there

Topic(s) of this poem: love, meeting, missing, time, wondering

Form: Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A story about meeting and missing each other

Comments about Date Time by Julie Smith

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (9/29/2016 8:43:00 PM)


    Rhythmical ticking of a waiting romantic heart, well heard. Thanks for sharing and congrats for being the PoD. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/29/2016 3:00:00 PM)

    Date Time
    I remember those good old days- so much fun and expectations..lovely poem great job rhyming.. (Report) Reply

  • Seamus O' Brian (9/29/2016 11:57:00 AM)


    Very fun, very brisk. Lots of movement. Very enjoyable reading. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
    :)
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  • (9/29/2016 9:52:00 AM)


    Congratulations on poem of the day, a very lovely piece (Report) Reply

  • Malcolm Two (9/29/2016 7:58:00 AM)


    Congratulation to be Poet of the day Julie, Well done (Report) Reply

    Julie Smith Julie Smith (10/1/2016 5:46:00 AM)

    Thank you Malcolm :)

  • Souren Mondal (9/29/2016 5:42:00 AM)

    Romantic ??????
    A very sweet, charming, and romantic poem. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on being the poet of the day 😀😀 (Report) Reply

    Julie Smith Julie Smith (9/29/2016 6:22:00 AM)

    Thank you so much :)

  • (9/29/2016 5:24:00 AM)

    title
    I was swept along by the beautiful rhythm of your poem. Delighted that you have been chosen
    for Poem of the Day. Well deserved too
    (Report) Reply

    Julie Smith Julie Smith (9/29/2016 6:21:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot for your nice words :)

  • Rajnish Manga (9/29/2016 3:22:00 AM)


    When the clock strikes nine I will be just fine
    Because this is the time that you will be mine. / Wow! Great poem...set the date and time for love.Thanks for sharing.
    (Report) Reply

    Julie Smith Julie Smith (9/29/2016 5:09:00 AM)

    Thank you very much :)

  • Robert Murray Smith (9/29/2016 1:34:00 AM)


    A wonderful romantic poem nicely executed.++++++++++10
    Congrats on poem of the day.
    Robert
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    Julie Smith Julie Smith (9/29/2016 5:09:00 AM)

    Thank you, glad you like it :) Yay I didn't expect that at all

  • Kim Barney (9/29/2016 1:34:00 AM)

    Date Time
    Well done. Congrats on having it chosen as poem of the day! (Report) Reply

    Julie Smith Julie Smith (9/29/2016 5:08:00 AM)

    Thanks :) This really made my day

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/29/2016 1:14:00 AM)

    Date Time
    I am forced to stay! Love and dreams. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

    Julie Smith Julie Smith (9/29/2016 5:08:00 AM)

    Thank you Edward :)

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 27, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 27, 2016


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