Dawn At Dusk Poem by Mastermind Poet
Dawn At Dusk
On the horizon the sun settled
As if to give them a minute to think
Like the way they say your life gives you a moment
To look back
To rejoice or lament
Before death takes over
This was dawn
No it was dusk
Depending on where you stood
The sun of youth gone
Real life finally rising
They had to take responsibility
To put on shoes that no one had prepared them
So they just looked at the rising sun
Damn! This was finally it...
A memorable and very insightful poem! Congratulations are due, and blessing too.
The sun of youth gone Real life finally rising.........superb feelings and the note- " As we grow up and realize that life is different from what we always think... adulthood is real" ........yes, exactly on the ever changing juvenile body of the universe we are all living souls in the evolution tyre of nature....... beautiful poem penned.......congrats for being selected this poem as POD....from me 10++
Pretty photo added upon this truthful poem.. Congratulations. Most deserving as The Member Poem Of The Day. Really a finest poem about life and its revolving.
A wonderful piece of work! Many congratulations for this magnificent poem being featured as Poem of the Day.
'To look back To rejoice or lament Before death takes over This was dawn No it was dusk Depending on where you stood' - An well presented dilemma. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!
Nice one.. good way of putting it.. clear 10 No going back Saturday,25th July 2020 nights are meant to recoup take a meal with night soup you shall have an idea to stage a coup that shall make you a powerful group Jadia Hasmukh
A well penned poem of the day. Simply splendid. Congrats on your featured poece.....10+++
This was dawn No it was dusk Depending on where you stood The sun of youth gone Real life finally rising.. thinking and philosophizing about dawn or dusk. tony
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I would like to translate this poem
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This is very insightful and beautifully crafted and this exactly happens with aging....10+++ .