Dead Tree Poem by Seema Aarella

Dead Tree

Rating: 4.9


I try to steal a chunk of sleep
From the eyes of a dozing infant
And reinforce my fading dreams

I try to lure the ethereal stillness
From the site of his cottage
To set an ambience around me

I carry the onus of desires
One by one, like the army of ants
And stack it safely before a storm

Soaring with my slender wings
I scan every garden for bright tokens
And tuck it along the twigs of my nest

I walk along the shores of time
Watching the ebb and tide of emotions
To learn the art of constant resurgence

Some nights I plead the stubborn sky
To dropp off a star at my every wish
In a state of juvenile madness

But it did not happen
The carnival of love never came
To the cheerless town of my heart

Still the spring of my desire waits
On the divested branch of time
Just lingering there, around that dead tree.

Monday, February 23, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.k Das 24 February 2009

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ONE OF THE BEST AND FINEST POEMS.will desist the temptation of analysising it word by word or line by line.such analysis will mar its beauty.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 February 2009

Sweet poetry. In fact very sweet. especillay the 5th stanza.

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Indira Babbellapati 25 February 2009

thnq, seema for drawing my attention to this particular poem of urs...to be a tree-dead or alive-and nothing more!

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Kesav Easwaran 25 February 2009

artful thoughts eloquently brought out...good poem...10

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Bob Blackwell 07 May 2009

This is beautiful poetry, a dead tree waits for rebirth, while you are waiting filling time decorating your nest to make an enchanting scene. 10++

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Indira Renganathan 26 February 2009

A good treatment of words to an awaiting lonely heart for love Seema...but why do you say 'a dead. tree'? ... does it suit a hopeful love...good poem anyway10

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Sadiqullah Khan 26 February 2009

Longing and hope in the last two stanzas is very appealing. A lovely poem.10

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Chitra - 25 February 2009

Food for thought, wonderfully written

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 25 February 2009

lovely words! you are absolutely one of most talented poets from India! keep writing!

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