Dear God I Am In Your Loving Scar Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Dear God I Am In Your Loving Scar

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Dear GOD

They give a wide-wide berth
Alone I live in Your longer sight
See me- wandering I am beggarly
Your widened loves scar me fairly
I requested You to put in a word for me
But was undecided at all I in ascot free
Did I let the grass grow under my feet?
Did I really go back on my promise?

Wednesday, January 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,despair,pray
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 10 July 2018

Did I let the grass grow under my feet? A question that is not only about the grass. Layi hayat aaye qaza le chali chale Apni khushi se aaye na apni khushi chale (Shaikh Ibrahim Zauq) Life brought us and we came, death took us back, we went back.

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Chinedu Dike 01 June 2018

Beautiful devotional piece of poetry written with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Mahtab.

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