Natural Art Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Natural Art

Rating: 5.0

They said that is nakedness
I said that is my born physical form

They said that pollutes the environment
I said that is my love

They said nudity has no dignity in society
I said that is my contemplation on God

They said that is fascinating but makes depraved
I said that is a beautiful flower

Oh, don't sever the flower
Don't deflower, be natural and fair

Chattogram © Mahtab Bangalee


flowers remain natural. beautiful cocnept

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Luis A. Estable 17 June 2021

It`s not clear the situation here. Is the person in the poem going around naked? There is nothing wrong with nudity if it takes places in the so called right places. But one won`t want to appear naked to a child.

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Kostas Lagos 17 June 2021

I like this poem. It has a shamanic touch!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 June 2021

Bravo! I really enjoyed this poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 June 2021

I like this fair poem anyway, to make the poet's own standpoint clearest. No one ought to insist his standpoint to the other, as the poet himself says: be natural. Honestly conveyed as crystal is natural and honest

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 26 December 2022

All flowers are nude. Nudity in itself is a flower. Good piece. Gives food for thought

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BRITTE NINAD 26 December 2022

thoughtfully penned

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A philosophical poem of high merit.....Top stars dear Mahtab

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M Asim Nehal 18 June 2021

Flowers are naked beauty. They don't need any dress or covering. Great write.5****

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Varsha M 17 June 2021

Yes no one sees or perceives flower as naked. You know the train of our imagination make things difficult.

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