MAHTAB BANGALEE

To You I Come

I come to your dawn
In you I find the part of awakening

I come to your noon
In you I find the life of busy working

I come to your evening
In you I find the part of lamp to lit up

I come to your night
In you I find the part of peace to sleep

I come to your dream
In you I discover the sun to implement the hymn

I come to your scarf
In you I find the clouds to quench the thirst

In your shadow I find my happiness
In your breath I find my lungs easiness
In your eyesight I plan my future match

Here all rivers still flowing for our love harmony
Here all flowers still blooming for our life unity

Birth and death playing nothing to our butterfly
Our love graciously agreed to lose together in sky

01.05.2020 Chattogram

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poem Submitted: Friday, May 1, 2020

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  • Akhtar Jawad (10/22/2020 3:57:00 AM)

    Life is due to love, and it's for love. A great poem on love.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (9/29/2020 12:33:00 PM)

    I come to your dream
    In you I discover the sun to implement the hymn
    very very poetic.
    wonderful images. thank you dear poet. tony

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  • Suresh Kumar EkSuresh Kumar Ek (9/18/2020 10:13:00 AM)

    the poem reflects the real harmony of love

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  • Soran M. HSoran M. H (8/10/2020 1:42:00 PM)

    there are very unique metaphors and new descriptions for love, teach us howto find a new life and hope in love, brilliant piece of work it deserves 10+

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  • Soran M. HSoran M. H (8/10/2020 1:39:00 PM)

    Birth and death playing nothing to our butterfly
    Our love graciously agreed to lose together in sky

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  • Soran M. HSoran M. H (8/10/2020 1:39:00 PM)

    I come to your dream
    In you I discover the sun to implement the hymn

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  • Mohabeer BeeharryMohabeer Beeharry (7/14/2020 4:16:00 AM)

    Hi this is a very deep and beautiful write. There is so much of sincerity and spiritual longing in it.
    Very sweet and soft emotionally.
    Mohabeer Beeharry

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (7/3/2020 3:44:00 AM)

    I come to your dawn
    In you I find the part of awakening

    I come to your noon
    In you I find the life of busy working

    I come to your evening
    In you I find the part of lamp to lit up- -Wow - -A great poem, thanks for sharing.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (6/30/2020 2:25:00 PM)

    In your shadow I find my happiness
    In your breath I find my lungs easiness
    In your eyesight I plan my future match

    All rivers are flowing
    all flowers and blooming. very fine poetic
    expressions my dear Mahtab. thank you. tony

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/30/2020 11:42:00 PM)

    bautiful poem, full of enthusiasm. lovely 10 dear

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (5/30/2020 11:37:00 PM)

    Marvelous revelation of a number of layers of the relationship and bondage of love. Congrats on well deserved poem of the day.

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  • Denis MairDenis Mair (5/30/2020 11:17:00 PM)

    Lovely words serving love...elevated soul-enticements. The final couplet is sublime, and the build-up to it is sublime. You describe a special place of love where eternity's higher-dimensional light breaks through, transfiguring our world of nature and feelings. A 10 and to my Favorites, again!

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (5/30/2020 10:25:00 PM)

    Earth's chest is now infected with an unknown virus
    The natural body of the earth is now sick

    The way to get well being unknown and have to stay home like prison cell
    So, stay home, stay safe


    Thanks again everyone

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (5/30/2020 10:24:00 PM)

    Thanks
    Thanks everyone
    Sincere thanks to all the respected, revered poets
    Those who have given valuable time to my writing, read, commented and voted,
    Thanks also to those who didn't have time for my writing,
    Thanks to those who will give me valuable time and votes in my writing after this comment

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (5/30/2020 10:24:00 PM)

    ধন্যবাদ
    ধন্যবাদ সকলকে
    আন্তরিক ধন্যবাদ সকল সম্মানিত, শ্রদ্ধেয় কবিগণকে
    যাঁরা আমার লিখনিতে মূল্যবান সময় দিয়েছেন, পড়েছেন, মন্তব্য করেছেন আর ভোট দিয়েছেন,
    ধন্যবাদ তাদেরকেও যাঁরা আমার লিখনিতে সময় দিতে পারেননি,
    ধন্যবাদ তাদেরকে যাঁরা আমার এ মন্তব্যের পর আমার লিখনিতে মূল্যবান সময় আর ভোট দিবেন

    পৃথিবীর বুক এখন এক অজানা ভাইরাসে সংক্রমিত
    পৃথিবীর প্রাকৃতিক শরীর এখন অসুস্থ

    সুস্থ্য হওয়ার উপায় অজানা বলেই থাকতে হবে ঘর বন্দি হয়ে
    অতএব ঘরে থাকুন, নিরাপদ থাকুন

    আবারো ধন্যবাদ সকলকে

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  • Shaun CronickShaun Cronick (5/30/2020 6:08:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem by a world class poet deserves no finer accolade.
    Salutations to you Mahtab for your most fine and tender poem on being chosen and deservedly so.
    Thank you Mahtab for writing and sharing a sparkling gemstone for one and all.

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (5/30/2020 5:09:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem of love
    A vivid portrayal of a kind of love that inspires
    one to live.
    It expresses in beautiful detail the unconditional
    affection that a pure and.deep love could bring.
    Beautifully crafted with great imagery.
    Congratulations for a well deserved accolade.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (5/30/2020 2:19:00 PM)

    I come to your night
    In you I find the part of peace to sleep
    I come to your dream
    In you I discover the sun to implement the hymn, ..Dearest Mahtab........ finally you are here as the hero as POD. love this.. congrats to you dear Mahtab. tony

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (5/30/2020 12:40:00 PM)

    A poem full of philosophical musings, spiritual harmony and togetherness.
    Thanks & Congrats for this coveted selection.

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  • James G BrennanJames G Brennan (5/30/2020 12:25:00 PM)

    A very lovely Poem Matab, congratulations on POTD.

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