Your grace,
vibrancy your hues
the fragrance of your
honey drips
inviting lure your petal lips!
I love you dearly,
Do you hear Red Rose?
How could I dislike you,
leave forlorn?
for those thorns
under your leaves alone!
Wow, this poem is short, yet so beautiful. I love the closing. By the way, thanks for leaving me a comment earlier. : -)
simple and wonderful..thorn comes as a package with this exquisite beauty..10
wow! this poem is so romantic and just makes me fill up with happiness. something about it. just makes me all warm and happy! i love it.10
Red roses are queen of flowers and queen of our hearts tooo! ..Enchante..Winnie
When I read your poem I take it as you are a bit sarcastic? But no other comments refer to that, so I guess I may misunderstand you. You are so aware of this 'beauty dilemma': You can´t get a rose if you don´t accept the thorns. But - if the rose would leave you, you wouldn´t miss the thorns. A very romantic AND realistic poem - at the same time! Amazing paradox!
Inspirational, intense and excellent verses very well penned.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful poem regards sandhya