Haiku- She Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Haiku- She

On lips smile alive
On her bright fun loving eyes
Tears never thrive!

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 January 2009

so sweet....sweet write she looks so charming and beautiful.. fiery lips and smiling eyes....beautiful image...tempting i love this..10+++++++++++++ and goes to my fave

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 February 2009

Traditional poets say that rhyming is not necessary in a haiku. B ut when rhymed the beautiful effect it gets is immense. This haiku is a genuine example

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Sandra Martyres 08 April 2009

A delightful haiku Kesav sweetly told - with the additional bonus of rhyme.10++++

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a lovely piece...brings the picture to mind

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Smiley Hooker 19 July 2009

This is quite charming, my friend. Gives a positive energy while reading. Thanks for sharing: -)

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Kingsley Egbukole 18 November 2023

Lively and happy lady. Well captured

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 November 2023

Excellent haiku TFS Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 18 November 2023

This is a brilliant haiku....

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Rob Lamberton 09 February 2023

Such an optimistic gal! I like her already. Thanks for the introduction!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2022

A wonderful haiku so adoringly expressed. Top score.

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