On lips smile alive
On her bright fun loving eyes
Tears never thrive!
31 05 08
Traditional poets say that rhyming is not necessary in a haiku. B ut when rhymed the beautiful effect it gets is immense. This haiku is a genuine example
A delightful haiku Kesav sweetly told - with the additional bonus of rhyme.10++++
This is quite charming, my friend. Gives a positive energy while reading. Thanks for sharing: -)
Such an optimistic gal! I like her already. Thanks for the introduction!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so sweet....sweet write she looks so charming and beautiful.. fiery lips and smiling eyes....beautiful image...tempting i love this..10+++++++++++++ and goes to my fave