Haiku- She Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Haiku- She

On lips smile alive
On her bright fun loving eyes
Tears never thrive!

31 05 08

Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 November 2008

beautiful definition of your 'she'... :)

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Gauri Gupta 22 December 2008

Beautifully written.

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Vinod Kumar 04 January 2009

She is always like that, very good haiku.Thanks for sharing.

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Anjali Sinha 11 January 2009

externally shes goodlooking internally lovlier than you can imagine -10 anjali

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 January 2009

so sweet....sweet write she looks so charming and beautiful.. fiery lips and smiling eyes....beautiful image...tempting i love this..10+++++++++++++ and goes to my fave

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2022

A wonderful haiku so adoringly expressed. Top score.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 February 2020

A beautiful haiku that captures happiness. Yes, tears never thrive in a person who has full of love. Brilliantly penned.

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Colleen Courtney 01 May 2014

Nicely done! Though shedding tears can be renewing!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 March 2010

Wow what a piece! ! Beyond spatial but sprite… Hats off Sir [uncountable tens –niv] Ms. Nivedita UK

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 08 December 2009

a very delightful piece...............................

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