Haiku- She Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Haiku- She



On lips smile alive
On her bright fun loving eyes
Tears never thrive!

31 05 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 November 2008

beautiful definition of your 'she'... :)

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Gauri Gupta 22 December 2008

Beautifully written.

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Vinod Kumar 04 January 2009

She is always like that, very good haiku.Thanks for sharing.

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Anjali Sinha 11 January 2009

externally shes goodlooking internally lovlier than you can imagine -10 anjali

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 January 2009

so sweet....sweet write she looks so charming and beautiful.. fiery lips and smiling eyes....beautiful image...tempting i love this..10+++++++++++++ and goes to my fave

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2022

A wonderful haiku so adoringly expressed. Top score.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 February 2020

A beautiful haiku that captures happiness. Yes, tears never thrive in a person who has full of love. Brilliantly penned.

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Colleen Courtney 01 May 2014

Nicely done! Though shedding tears can be renewing!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 March 2010

Wow what a piece! ! Beyond spatial but sprite… Hats off Sir [uncountable tens –niv] Ms. Nivedita UK

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 08 December 2009

a very delightful piece...............................

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